tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post5676885138394321865..comments2023-12-30T03:54:06.864-08:00Comments on Sylvia's Literary BlogSpot: A Little Bit Of Sin - Chapter 6.1Sylvia Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12058864162890325349noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-89781777173109771602009-03-21T23:11:00.000-07:002009-03-21T23:11:00.000-07:00It's all coming together now and I am really enjoy...It's all coming together now and I am really enjoying this story.Torihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17645887589503725670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-41970975525346351362009-03-13T15:57:00.000-07:002009-03-13T15:57:00.000-07:00its like you took a class i can deff see the chang...its like you took a class i can deff see the changes. not that you were bad before lol. but its nice to know that youre still growing withyour writing styleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-41402232831806314162009-03-13T11:57:00.000-07:002009-03-13T11:57:00.000-07:00Yeah, I decided to work it now when it was appropr...Yeah, I decided to work it now when it was appropriate instead of bore everyone in the beginning with all these details. <BR/><BR/>I'm trying to work more with getting things out smoothly using dialogue and actions. <BR/><BR/>On top of that, I'm just trying to get you to look one way while I do something else. <BR/><BR/>Ha ha.Sylvia Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12058864162890325349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-56024751719679652482009-03-13T10:45:00.000-07:002009-03-13T10:45:00.000-07:00This chapter explained so much for me, about their...This chapter explained so much for me, about their brotherhood, their past, crazy parents, and especially about Ben's finances.<BR/><BR/>Great job, Sylvia!Suprinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04097147272286189832noreply@blogger.com