tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post6980796780618869723..comments2023-12-30T03:54:06.864-08:00Comments on Sylvia's Literary BlogSpot: Sin's Iniquity - Chapter 50.2Sylvia Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12058864162890325349noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-27394977028036397282007-03-13T06:10:00.000-07:002007-03-13T06:10:00.000-07:00I have read your books these are my observations.....I have read your books these are my observations....<BR/><BR/>As much as u give importance and details to the sex scenes you dont ponder too much in emotions. I can understand her confusion about Dwights thoughts on her but at the same point in time a person grieving why would she care to please any other men at this stage in her life? I think if you could improve on projecting more on emotions of persons too the book of yours would be good. I didnt agree the chapter where she is coming back to consiousness she is thinking of Chance's anatomy the first thing! And the latest chapter where she is concerned about her looks just becoz bellini comes to visit her is really lame and brings down your book tremendously. considering the previous sentence where u describe her thinking of Dwight i think she would be more confused as to why he wants to visit her.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13456339.post-35697441898084648512007-03-12T14:13:00.000-07:002007-03-12T14:13:00.000-07:00Ok...now....whats up with Sinclaire? Suddenly now ...Ok...now....whats up with Sinclaire? Suddenly now she's noticing all these men? Girlfriend did a complete 360 here!<BR/><BR/>LjayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com