I should let you know that you're going to hate me at the end of this....I haven't checked my mail for any more offline comments, but I'll talk to you later. Hope your Monday is not going as bad as mine. I just found out my schedule will be changed to an 8 to 5. Yuck! My kids get out at 3pm and I don't have anyone to help me pick them up. This makes me feel so crappy and I almost wish I could a full time writer so I could just depend on myself like I've been doing.
oh well, that's the struggle of a single mother, huh?
I'll try to post more later, but no physical threats. Enjoy...
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stop sitting there baffled and confused. Hit the Comment tab and let me know what you're thinking because as super powered that I am at writing, my mind reading skills are sadly lacking. I'd love to know what's on your mind, please....
10 comments:
Hey Sylvia,
Sorry to hear about the change of schedule and how that affects your after school arrangements...
How old are your children? Are they old enough to be alone for a few hours until you arrive home? Are there any afterschool programs they can participate in, like an extended daycare?
Good luck!
PG
BTW, I'm thoroughly enjoying Sin's Iniquity; I know there are a lot of people who are anxious for the sex, but I like the fact that Dwight can control himself enough to make sure Sinclaire is okay with herself and their relationship, before he presses the issue...
Hey this is your biggest fan Keisha I am very sorry to hear about your daycare issue I definitly understand being a single mother myself to a three month old. I appreciate that you take so much time out of your day to write for those such as me who love love love your writing as far as the question about when will actual sex happen I hope it never does I think these two should only make love and neither one of them are there yet. Sin needs to open up first understand that true love is unconditional then she will be ready. As for how you left the story I am trying to hold on to my sanity I can not believe you stopped there at that point but it does make the story more suspenseful so I guess I will have to wait till in the morning unless you post something else before 4:30pm to find out what is going on.
Miss Sylvia, I was going to suggest an after-school program as well,but somebody beat me to it. My niece and nephew are in one (a gov't funded one at that) and they love it! My sister also loves it because they help the kids with homework and give healthy snacks so she doesn't have to do much when she comes to pick them up.
See if Detroit has something like that available. It's worth looking into.
Okay, on to the story. I have to agree with Keisha yet, for slightly different reasons. Yes, I don't want Sinclaire and Dwight to make love yet because they're both still not ready.
Honestly, I don't want them to make love EVER if she turns out to be related to him. In case I didn't make myself clear before INCEST stories CREEP ME OUT! You can thank 2 of my creepy (male) relatives for that since they didn't understand boundaries when my siblings and I were children.
Anyhoo...I'm sticking with this story, because I like you as an author and have a level of trust in your writing. Meaning, I know you like to shock (like in Mistaken Identity - lol), but you've never been blatantly distasteful such as to allow us to witness such tender moments of foreplay between Sinclaire and Dwight only to reveal that they are related later.
Though I would still like YOU if you did that, I would not like THAT at all...and would probably be hot with you for a few days. But hey, I'm a fast forgiver, so I'll definitely get over it. smile.
Just my 2 pennies,
Suprina
This plot thickens. You never know what is going happen next with you. Interresting....
WTF!! SYLVIA!!!! COME. ON.!!!!
Ljay
OMG- u r still the best Sylvia and here I am on the edge of my seat wondering what happened.
As for incest, pls don't let it be the case- i will be seriously disappointed :( and the fact that they are njoin each other without going fully is no excuse (shudder)!
Aran
Totally agree with cinquetta, oral sex is sex - don't be fooled. Sylvia, got caught up in all the loving Dwight and Sinclaire were giving each other this gunshot thing came out of nowhere.
Hope he's not hurt.
If their prelude to intercourse is this hot, the rest will be burning the page down.
Waiting...not patiently.
I'm speechless....just speechless. What is going on??? How is doing the shooting: Dwight, King Heart, or someone else like Sinclaire's daddy? Is anybody hurt, does Sinclaire have to worry about her safety now, especially around Dwight? And damn, how many secrets Sinclaire got, lol...what's gonna turn him away now.
Sylvia...you are so wrong, lol. You knew what you were doing leaving a cliffy like that and then telling us to comment. That cliffhanger was to big not to comment on lol. Oh yeah and it just hit me that they didn't have intercourse yet...that totally slipped my mind. And I agree with Cinquetta, in my book oral sex is sex....so they are having sex. But you know what this whole thing reminds me of your last book Sweet Reunion...how Zeke didn't want to have intercourse at first, but wanted that intimacy. Well Dwight and Sinclaire are having alot of that, but right now I just want to know what is going on with my man (sorry Sinclaire lol) cause there should be nobody trying to come at him like that.
Oh no somebody was trying to warn him with the 5 missed calls...could that have been Delano. What about his kids *gasp*. Syvlia hurry back with the update cause we need answers! And Taylor hasn't been around in awhile, you think she might have something to do with this...only she, Delano, and maybe Dwight's kids knew where they were.
Ok keisha again i never never never thought of the possible they could be related in any sense please please please do not make that happen they are both just finding love and they need eachother not to be grossed out by eachother also please give update soon I am like feein for more info
WOW!
What's going on?? can't wait to read what really happened here.
For Suprina, I don't think incest is Sylvia style, after all in Mistaken Identity it was a relation between a woman and two man, the twins never actually had sex together, just with the same woman...
My feeling it that Dwight and Sinclaire are not related, but Sinclaire's sister and Dwight might, we may learn that they are not twins after all, but cousins, Sinclaire not been Mel daughther but her late sister's one, that will explain why Mel never treat her like a daughter.
Jackson's company has to do with Dwight and Bellini's new deal and that could be why Dwight wasn't feeling it.
Well I'll stop guessing here and wait for the rest of the story 'cause I know that whatever happen I'll love it
Sylvia I hope you'll find a solutions for your kids, good luck
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