Tuesday, March 28, 2006

Tanner's Devil Part 43.3

I seriously phucked up the template on this blog. Don't know what I did or how i did it, but I erased EVERYTHING!

good thing blogger is like idiot proof and I put all my HTML's in a safe place. The blog should be back to normal by the end of the day.

Guess what, JDub, I started my belly dancing workout regime. Got the DVD on amazon and when I woke up this morning it felt like someone had punched me in the stomach all night long. LOL. But it was so worth it. If I could just lose my kangaroo pouch, I'd be da bomb!

sorry for taking so long for this post too and thank you all for the words of encouragement.

Yeah, I been pretty quiet in the response department and those comments i chose to post from the readers instead of rejecting was mean, yeah but I'm a writer and I should take critique of my work openly. So I decided to let it go and see what you all said about it.

And yes, you are paying my child's tuition because her worthless father refuses to pay. He moved to another state and taking money under the table so no one can trace him. He won't even give me an address. Yes, I blame myself, but this is a handup not a handout. I am a single mother of three working like a Jamaican to get the job done. I'm not taking advantage of the system and I'm contributing towards the system too with every dime I earn and the taxes I pay.

Okay, Enjoy!...

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17 comments:

Fraley said...

Dear Mrs. Cliffhanger,

I am sitting her grabbing my chest and trying to breathe. Please tell me that some one is going to get there in time. This is not like you, where is my happy ending?

Tosha

Anonymous said...

Please don't let Devlin die,Tanner can not get a break!
I hope you get the book published soon. I love this story! Now are you going to do a love story for Pari?Please say yes!

Sylvia Hubbard said...

Fraley: Oh that was funny. "Dear Ms. Cliffhanger." LOL. Oh wow! It's that serious that I give you a happy ending? well let's look at this realistically. she's a hooker, she's doing illegal medical practices, and she's never had it good in her life! Why should she get a happy ending?

Anonymous1: Yes, I'm going to do a story with Pari. I might mix it up with Lethal's story, or I might let it stand on its own.
Still contemplating that story line, but if it stands on its own, it'll be called King's Paradise.

Sweets said...

Oh come on!! You can't kill Devlin. He deserves as much happiness as Tanner does. You can't kill him off. Please I beg you.

Sing Dammit said...

Sylvia,

That baby needs his daddy! That is all.

I figured Donatello (I keep thinking Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles) would be the type to kill himself if he couldn't have Tanner. That's the type of punk he was. Good riddance...although I wish he and Richard had gotten some blows in...

Sing Dammit

Anonymous said...

Come on, no matter what Tanner did in her past ,she is trying and ok maybe my heads are in the clouds but she should a have happy ending,why should happy endings be for skinny,rich,and pretty heifers!

Shai said...

Gurl, what happened to your car fund?

Add what was leftover from Saturday to the fund. LOL.

You really gettin us all wound up. Devlin ain't gonna die. So let's move on to the end. A sista needs a happy ending. LOL>

JDUB said...

Sylvia,
good for you and the belly dancing i should get one of those DVD's myself. I have been good about going to the gym even joined weight watchers it sucks. I hate the gym as you can tell from my blog :)

Anywhose Please give Tanner a happy ending i really can't see her going back to the streets. You know the mama is going to blame her if Devlin dies.

Also loved your response... being a single mother without help is damn hard, and those who do not know the struggle like myself but have single friends with kids and see them in the same situation we are amazed on how you you all do it alone. I might have to blog about that topic :)

Stand Strong!

Anonymous said...

don't tell me he died...I couldn't handle it. It's like I'm in Tanner's shoes.

Anonymous said...

I loved the ending and I'm sure that Devlin will be okay because this could all turn out to be some sort of dream for one of them.

Also thanks for printing my comment Sylvia I honestly didn't expect that.

I can locate your ex in a heart beat because I'm good at finding those that don't want to be found.

This story is still on the lame side but when time permits I'll check out your other books.

Signed

Dezi

Anonymous said...

Sylvia,

I like to be unique, but I must agree with the masses. Tanner deserves a happy ending; for that matter we deserve a happy ending lol. Devlin has to survive if only to tell his mother that she is going to have a black grandchild...Now that is a family dinner to be at. By the way who is the father of Latasha's baby?

Kim

Anonymous said...

I wanted to say to you Sylvia and any other single parents out there, that I know how hard it can be to raise your child and have the other parent be so uncaring.Before my son passed away his father was the same way but I was blessed to have a wonderful man ,my son's step father stepped up and took the place his real father should have. I know sometimes the pressures of money and work can be hard but let me tell I would give it all up if I could hold my son one more time or have him look at me with his sweet eyes and say "I love you mom,' I know now it seems hard but when it all said and done you can be proud of what you did for you and the childs father well one day he will have to face his deeds.When you have a tough day and you wonder how much you can take just look at your child and know that you have the greastest treasure a person can ever have and for those of that have lost our child we would give up everything we have earned just to have what you have...Priscilla

Anonymous said...

Yes what happen to Latasha, the sneaky ho.

Tonya Valdez said...

OK..... so I leave for a short vacation and Devlin dies....... WRONG!!!
Sylvia, listen carefully: ALL love stories end with "and they lived happily ever after".... it's been that way since the beginning of time and you can't just roll out here in 2006 and mess that up. SOME of us live for the "happily ever afters"....

About the baby daycare situation, keep your head up- there are good things in store for you. One day you'll look back on this experience and and remember how it used to be.

Uhm.... Dezi Dominici or A.K.A. "Anonymous" we don't get down like that up in here. It's one thing to provide "Constructive" criticism and quite another to just be rude.

Tonya Valdez said...

OK..... so I leave for a short vacation and Devlin dies....... WRONG!!!
Sylvia, listen carefully: ALL love stories end with "and they lived happily ever after".... it's been that way since the beginning of time and you can't just roll out here in 2006 and mess that up. SOME of us live for the "happily ever afters"....

About the baby daycare situation, keep your head up- there are good things in store for you. One day you'll look back on this experience and and remember how it used to be.

Uhm.... Dezi Dominici or A.K.A. "Anonymous" we don't get down like that up in here. It's one thing to provide "Constructive" criticism and quite another to just be rude.

Anonymous said...

That's nice to know Ms Valdez because I was sooo curious as to how you people "got down up in here" madame.

I don't believe engaging in a battle of wits with an unarmed person but in your case I will make an exception Ms Valdez.

Question...... are all the women in here single, bitter and over the age of thirty or just you Ms Valdez.

BTW was that 'constructive' enough for you Ms Valdez because unlike you I like to be honest with people just like I love receiving honest opinions from people and just because you don't like the way I critic someone's work it still did not change the fact that I, as in my own singular opinion, felt that this long drawn out story was lame.

That's the problem with people like you not everyone has to agree with what is being said but we can agree to disagree Ms Valdez.

I always sign my name after writing the comment so don't worry about my anonym status choice since I am also entitled to free speech or did you forget about that Ms Valdez.

Signed,

Dezi Dominici

Anonymous said...

One more thing Ms Valdez

I can get Ms Hubbarbs works published......

Can you????

Signed,

Dezi Dominici

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