Monday, March 03, 2008

Chapter 44.2

yeah, you're going to kill me, but i really tried to find anotherway to get to this point and yes, the S.H.T.F. like it ain't funny.

Now you may think, well, she gotta out of the house. she could have sneaked away from Cheyenne and climbed down the stairs and hidden away and she's just going to make this beautiful appearance. Parker will sweep her up in his arms and they'll live happily ever after.

can Cheyenne really kill her pregnant sister? I think if she could kill her twin then killing her sister sses evitable .


I'm taking a brain break and then starting up on my way home.

enjoy...

________________________

This post has been removed. This book is available for download and/or print at: http://lulu.com/sylviahubbard
His Substitute Wife... My Sister Chapter 44.2 (c) 2008 Sylvia Hubbard

20 comments:

Eva D said...

omg sylvia you gone make me cry already had my tummy bubbling this is not good. i mean we kno she's not dead you would NEVER kill the main character syl NEVER!! cuz you dont like ppl callin your house nd texting you nd bothering you!! lol just joking but that was something serious where did those hoes take her? i kno the twins are together maybe charisse decided 2 burn the house and got out.. where are they?? dont leave us like this? i wont be able 2 get no work done at all!!

Carmel Beauty said...

I ain't joking she better not be dead you had me feeling the same way with Tanner and if ohmygod i can't think barely type you would think this girl was my sister what the hell I am what is going on please please please tell me this girl and her babies are not dead i don't know if i will be able to make it till tomorrow oh my god I am checking expedia RIGHT NOW!

Anonymous said...

OMG! If they hurt her, I want to put a Texas sized beating on them!

Jrboss said...

OMG, OMG, What the hell? OK, I'm scared. Where is she? I really wasn't expecting the house to blow up. Brilliant, but now I'm like ok think, what would Sylvia have to happen now and of course I can't think straight LOL. Eva had a good thought, maybe Charissa was smart enough to burn the house as a means of escape. Whatcha say Sylvia ;)

Anonymous said...

Pls tell me u did not kill Chyna, cos u said Cheynne killed her twin sister........ anyway i no charrise isnt dead, but sth nasty is gonna happen.

TIA said...

OMG Sylvia, I was next to tears, about to ball like someone in my family was in that fire. I am with Eva, I pray that Charisse light the house on fire herself... You could never kill innocent kids, Sylvia that is just wrong. I know that did not happen like that.

Please explain in more detail your statement: "Now you may think, well, she gotta out of the house. she could have sneaked away from Cheyenne and climbed down the stairs and hidden away and she's just going to make this beautiful appearance. Parker will sweep her up in his arms and they'll live happily ever after." Are you trying to tell us none of those things/statements are options??

Anyway, I dont believe you just did that, I blame Parker for being so stupid anyway and leaving her, why in the world he needed a Man to ride with him to the cabin.. Escape Plan B, what ever happened to that. People always so comfortable and never following their guts, it could save someone's life! PARKER!!!!!!
Signed,
HOT & Furious with my writer!!!!

Anonymous said...

This is my first time commenting since I found this story last month. I am enjoying this story very much, but I agree with Eva d, you would not kill the main character.

Please hurry up and give us some releif.

Sylvia I have so many of your stories. I have not read them all, I just buy them and then when I have time I read. Very good work.

I would love a sequal to Tanner's Devil

Pris

Anonymous said...

Holy crap talk about one intense chapter. I bow down to the queen of C's. I was not expecting that to happen, now i am biting my nails here at work eagerly awaiting tomorrow's post.

lilo.gurl.14 said...

Happy Monday :) man too much drama in the fiction world. First, “big love” then, “desperate housewives”, “greys anatomy” and now this.

I can’t take it anymore. Drama in the real world drama in the fiction world. (now this may sound like an old lady but, MAN Jesus need to come back a sister need some rest.) sigh.

Yea I think the nurse was the one who made the leak because she cant tell the diff between the twins. And as for the rest of the story me nah know. I’m feeling sick. Going to roll over now.

Another manic Monday... sigh

Paula said...

SYLVIA, I am not going to FREAK OUT about this. I KNOW Onyx is on it and she is going to KICK SOMEONE'S A$$.

Please do not let anything happen to Charisse. I have faith in you that tomorrow we will all see the light.

GREAT POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFHANGER FOR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS. ONE OF THOSE BITCHES GOTTA DIE. IT NEEDS TO BE JOANIE FIRST SINCE CHYNA MOST LIKELY IS PROBABLY DEAD.

Hey, Please do not tell me that Chyna is in on what is going on with Charisse. THEY HAVE GOTTA DIE! PAY FOR THEIR SINS!!!!!!!!
LMAO

cinquetta said...

AHSHAP...DAMN...DAMN...DAMN! Sylvia what have you done? You did it now!! So Cheyenne might have kill or lock away her twin Chyna. Cheyenne might have took her twin place. First clue how in the hell Cheyenne heal so fast. Even the doctor was amaze about Chyna full recovery. Second clue how Chyna get to Detroit head of time.

Please say it isn't so Charisse is not DEAD. One of the twins or both has fake Charisse death. I am upset and confuse. You are going to fix this right Sylvia...RIGHT!!!

Tori said...

That was such a emotional chapter and I was crying...lol. You really did it to me and now I am going to be bed all sad and weepy.

Suprina said...

Dang, girl. You sure know how to torment your characters. I'm surprised all of them ain't in some institution once you're done with them.

You're also skilled at raising questions, Sylvia. That's key in order to keep reader interest going. For instance, right now I'm wondering:

1. Will Parker have a HEA?
2. How can Parker have a HEA with Charisse now gone (allegedly)? He don't want Chyna or Cheyenne anymore.
3. Where is Chyna? Dead?
4. Did Cheyenne and her crew, snatch the babies out of Charisse's belly before they killed her?

See what I'm talking about, Sylvia? You're doing your job, girl. Doing it well, too.

Suprina

P.S. I'm trying to leave the story up on the V-O-D for you, but since the book has now gone to print, I am going to be taking it down soon. Let me know if you just want me to email you a copy since you obviously are too busy to read the whole thing in time.

Anonymous said...

Lord almighty Sylv...what have you gone and done?????????? Ever since chapter 44 i've been sittin' on pins and needles and now THIS??? see charisse should have gone with him!!!!! I swear i was reading this and keeping myself from crying for Parker's distress and misery..i mean can you imagine a woman supposed to be immersed in her work just staring at a screen with tears rolling down? what will my boss say if he finds me like dat? ya'll gotta stop doing bombs like this on me so early in the day...BUT I LOVE IT!!!! i think the twins cartered charisee off and replaced her body to make it look like she did die but that sounds like a scene from one of your other stories with a burning house and heroine escaping. Knowing you ......you won't take us there SO...........WERE WE GOIN' Sylvia????? where's charisse??!!!!! gnawin' my nails in anxiety!!! (just kiddin'-yucky habit!)

Tanya

Anonymous said...

and why for heaven's sake couldn't Mandingo have started his lookin' at the house instead of the salon!!!!!!!!!!!! argggghhhhhhhhhhh...the tension is killin' me!!!!!! please post again today or i'll buzz you long distance and bug you over the phone!!!!! (smiles)

Tanya

Tia said...

I have class all day today, DARN! So please dont do anything crazy please..... Oh and I do have your number (dont force me to use it), even though I was not one to call or text you yesterday, I probably know who did it though....

Post, please post, turn things around. That's the true power you have as being the writer!!!

lola said...

plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sylvia!.the suspense is tooo much.i bet you are loving every minute of it. post the rest now!!!!!!!!!! plss!
from your number one fan from nigeria.

lola said...

plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sylvia!.the suspense is tooo much.i bet you are loving every minute of it. post the rest now!!!!!!!!!! plss!
from your number one fan from nigeria.

Sylvia Hubbard said...

lola: Imma coming. workng out the details.

Julia said...

Well that's one way for S.T..H..F! Jeez, what's the next disaster up your sleeve, Sylvia?

Books

Books
all books by Sylvia Hubbard - collect them all!
DON'T FORGET TO VOTE FOR HOW MANY BOOKS YOU'VE READ BY THIS AUTHOR! SCROLL TO THE BOTTOM OF THE SIDEBAR AND CAST YOUR VOTES. EVEN IF YOU VOTED, BUT READ MORE, YOU CAN ALWAYS CHANGE YOUR VOTE! VOTE TODAY AND VOTE OFTEN! THANKS

PUBLICIST DONATION

Help Me Pay My Publicist!


Click Here For Details



Or do me one better and buy a book at my bookstore (they make great gifts for all)!:
Sylvia Hubbar'ds Fiction Bookstore


Or pass the word to five friends because word of mouth is the best advertising and the more people that know about me the better chance I have to get that dream publishing deal from that dream publisher. Help a sistah out! Click Here or click the envelope above.
The copyright to the text of the blog is held by the author, where applicable. All images displayed are copyright their respective owners and are used either under licence or under the fair use provisions of international copyright law.