Friday, March 06, 2009

A Little Bit of Sin - Chapter 3.2

I tried to post this earlier before I left for work and when I got home, I saw that it was still not posted.

I'm sorry ... really I am...

Of course, I had to do this earlier than later...

Don't hate me...

I'll see you Monday.

Enjoy


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A Little Bit of Sin Won't Hurt Chapter 3.2 (c) 2009 Sylvia Hubbard. All Rights Reserved

6 comments:

Suprina said...

Okay, it looks like things are about to go down between Colin and Syn. While I wrap my mind around that, Sylvia, answer me this, who is Syn really marrying - George or some guy named Ben?

At the beginning of this chapter, Kat mentioned something about Syn marrying Ben. Were you typing too fast? Or was your subconscious mind trying to change the names without your permission? lol.

Maybe it's my eyes. I did read this chapter without my glasses.

Just wondering...

Sylvia Hubbard said...

i was trying to tell everyone that in the first thing.

i write on the bus and sometimes with all the noise i can't remember the name of some of the minor characters.

I'm changing my wriitng style a little. Instead of introducing the characters right away, I'm throwing them into the story to be "talked" about so it's a better effect when you do meet him. I

I did a little of this in my other book Deceptive nights when you only heard about her husband but didn't meet him until much later.

that way the effect was better on the reader because it was like you had met them them already and it wasn't such a curve ball when the cliffhanger or the shtf moment involved them.

stay with me and bear it out for a sec. i'm working from the seat of my pants and with my new phone i cna't write like i used to. (that's what i get for switching from nokia to samsung, right?)

Paula said...

WOW, Colin has got some issues going on inside him. Why does he keep on say he is going to hell?

This story is sure to keep us on our toes!

Suprina said...

Sylvia, at least you GOT a Samsung phone with those capabilities. The cell phones in my house barely let me check my email on the internet when I'm away from the computer. lol.

I'll get new mobiles when my budget increases. Right now I'm trying to get a laptop that I can take on the road with me. This way I can continue to fill e-book orders from wherever I am and not have to depend on my home computer so much.

Anyhoo, that is a great new technique you're using. It definitely builds reader suspense, because it keeps us wondering when we're going to meet the actual person that's constantly being talked about.

Suprina

P.S. I agree, Paula. This story is going to keep us on our toes. But then again, most of Sylvia's stories do. At least in my case. :)

Theirdre said...

This story is about get real real good from here on.

Tori said...

Well we all know Colin has some issues but let's not forget about Syn who has not spoken to her sister in five years. There has to be more to that story as well. I am not trying to focus on Colin issues but Syn has some to even though she is beautiful. She is hiding something deep, especially with that old boyfriend about almost losing her freedom over plus she don't speak to his sister anymore.

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